Flattened Ears

Alright, Physical Feedback's honeymoon period is over. It's time to start cracking down. I'm getting out the tear gas. Normally I prefer to focus on positive reviews rather than negative ones when I can, but with this series I've actually been looking forward to reviewing some of the shittier bits of smut out there, because I think pornography is badly in need of some serious negative criticism in places. In my experience, one of two things will stand in the way of this; People who view pornography as inherently problematic or inherently non-artistic who simply dismiss the art form as a whole without bothering to actually put forth any real analysis, which is obviously not productive, and people who like pornography and aren't interested in actually looking at it in a critical fashion, and will brush off any complaints about lack of quality with "don't take it so seriously, it's just porn." Right out of the gate it's clear that this gam

Hot Shit High Chapter 1 can be read here . It's time to introduce another character who will surely be making repeat appearances over the course of this series: Erotibot . A western porn artist who takes stylistic influence from both live-action western pornography and japanese h-doujinshi, Erotibot made a huge impression on me with the first work of his that I saw: Hot Shit High. The setting is a loving pastiche of exaggerated americana; a high school where the cheerleaders are so cartoonishly promiscuous as to have no qualms removing their panties in the hallway, the jocks are utter pigheaded oafs who maintain social standing through intimidation and threats of gun violence, and should a trigger be pulled in between classes, a teacher will burst out of the nearest classroom, blazing away with a tommy gun and exclaiming "NO SHOOTING IN THE HALL!" I wasn't kidding Our story focuses on Marvin, a lame-ass nerd who the head cheerleader Sharlene has set her si

One of these days I'll probably write up something taking a deeper look at Fenoxo's individual pornographic text adventures and possibly comparing them, but for the moment I'd like to spotlight his work in general, particularly Corruption of Champions 1 and Trials in Tainted Space, as the two that I'm most familiar with. These pieces are interesting not for their specific handling of any individual fetish, but rather the breadth of tastes they cater to, each featuring fairly hefty character customization systems (down to allowing the player to take perks in anal elasticity and semen production and such) and a wide array of horrifying and/or arousing situations for the player to land themselves in. Additionally they feature surprisingly in-depth system by which various aspects of the player's character can be changed over time; get fucked by something a bit bigger than you can easily accommodate, and you'll find your anus stretching over time. Eat certain types

I'm planning on covering a fairly wide and varied collection of good porn on this series before I start dipping my toe into the mediocre or outright bad, and to that end we have our second subject of scrutiny: Cats Can Fetch , in which FluffKevlar depicts a wonderful little encounter between a catboy twink and a canine futanari. This one opens with a lot more plot setup than Come On! Shoot Faster did, and while it relies much less on suspension of disbelief, it's unfortunately just kinda boring, so let's fast forward through most of that. All you really need to know is that canine girl Lia has a crush on catboy Twix, and he thinks she's cute but in order to really be interested in a relationship he needs the cock. Fortunately, Lia is equipped with such weaponry, and shows him as much in one of the private study rooms. From this point it goes exactly where you'd expect it to; blowjob to anal to untimely discovery leading into a comedic ending. In the broad strok