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Physical Feedback: Train Rush

Today's subject is a comic by furry artist Chinpo, which has very little in the way of writing, comprising almost exclusively of filthy filthy sex.

And this time around I'm not even being quite so ironic as usual in calling it "filthy," as the actions portrayed here consist of public exhibitionism, which aside from being illegal in most places is also a generally not-okay thing to do in real life since it means involving third parties into your sexual activity without their foreknowledge or consent. Early in the comic the two participants are simply getting it on in a technically "public" place, but one in which nobody else is immediately present and where they're trying to avoid being actually seen; this changes toward the end, when one creampies the other while facing her toward an open door, on the other side of which stand several commuters.
The intent is clear
Furthermore, the girl knows all this, she's clearly reluctant to get into sexual activity in this public place, but is seemingly overcome with the intensity of the physical stimulation as it goes on, which is underscored by the rushed, slapdash approach taken toward undressing; she's still wearing her skirt, and even when her breasts are exposed the bra isn't fully removed, simply pulled down out of the way. This does an excellent job of emphasizing her physical and emotional experience, especially as it contrasts to the much more deliberate demeanor of her boyfriend, in one of my favorite sort of sub/dom dynamics, where one is calmly and precisely taking control of the situation whilst the other gives up all control in the fact of overwhelming stimulus.

The art, of course, sells this extremely well, as she is shown with a shy, nervous blush, before gradually transitioning to to state of teary-eyed passion, utterly losing herself in the act.
This is a girl who has lost control
Aside from effectively conveying the emotional arc of the situation, Chinpo's artwork also does an excellent job at portraying visually appealing characters; Their fur looks invitingly soft, just begging the viewer to reach out and pet it, while also conveying a pleasing sense of smoothness, without completely removing some of the more feral attributes of sharp teeth and claws; It comes off as more civilized than FluffKevlar's work, but without sacrificing much of the appeal in the process.

Train Rush is an exceedingly simple piece of art, but it executes that simplicity to perfection, and for this receives a 5/5.

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